I loved the story, as well as the first one :) The characters in particular have just the right amount of being relatable (queer trans guy here so not exactly the same but still a lot in common), badass-ness and vulnerability, and that makes them positively adorable. And I liked the style of the art as well!
On a side note, there are error messages about images 'praça' and 'praçanoite' not found, and when the girls talk about the anime series that Fran likes there's a moment when the two character sprites are superposed on the right of the screen. But those are just minor bugs, and overall the game is excellent! Congrats!